Applepaw || thunderclan
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Applepaw || thunderclan
by Blackstar June 5th 2011, 6:14 am
Name: Applepaw
Gender: she-cat
Age: around 7moons
Affiliate: Thunderclan
Rank: apprentice.
Looks:
Personality: Shes always been quiet and kept to her self. Shes never made friends easy. Shes a bit of an out sider and has alway dreamed of finding some one to make her feel more at home in the clan. Applepaw has always had a soft spot for kits.
Birth: She wasn't born in Thunderclan camp - more in the territory and then her mother died during kitting. Her father was a rogue so she never knew him. She doesnt have any siblings either.
History:
Shes always kept to her self meaning she rarely got into trouble. She never had done anything interesting either, so you could say shes in the good books. When her mother was kitting her brother didn't survive, and she only found out a while ago that she had a brother for a few minutes.
Gender: she-cat
Age: around 7moons
Affiliate: Thunderclan
Rank: apprentice.
Looks:
Personality: Shes always been quiet and kept to her self. Shes never made friends easy. Shes a bit of an out sider and has alway dreamed of finding some one to make her feel more at home in the clan. Applepaw has always had a soft spot for kits.
Birth: She wasn't born in Thunderclan camp - more in the territory and then her mother died during kitting. Her father was a rogue so she never knew him. She doesnt have any siblings either.
History:
Shes always kept to her self meaning she rarely got into trouble. She never had done anything interesting either, so you could say shes in the good books. When her mother was kitting her brother didn't survive, and she only found out a while ago that she had a brother for a few minutes.
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Re: Applepaw || thunderclan
by Snigger June 5th 2011, 8:59 am
Personality and History need to be longer
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Re: Applepaw || thunderclan
by Snigger June 5th 2011, 9:15 am
Did you put a comma instead of a period in one spot by accident?
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Re: Applepaw || thunderclan
by KYUU June 6th 2011, 9:16 am
-giggles at Snig's Snignature- Hehe, I completely forgot I said that. <3
-ahem- Because the English teacher inside me was screaming, I editted your profile to fix the punctuation and capitalization errors.
Accepted.
-ahem- Because the English teacher inside me was screaming, I editted your profile to fix the punctuation and capitalization errors.
Accepted.
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Re: Applepaw || thunderclan
by Snigger June 6th 2011, 9:41 am
Kyuu. . .there's a comma at the end of the history. . .
YOU FAILED! D<
YOU FAILED! D<
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Re: Applepaw || thunderclan
by KYUU June 6th 2011, 9:51 am
WELL SORRY FOR TYPING AT SCHOOL! DX ERTV is being distracting...
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