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Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 3rd 2010, 9:08 pm
Blue Robin.
CHAPTER ONE!
CHAPTER ONE!
Many years ago, it was foreseen, a time of great sacrifice to the clans. A time where battle was all around, and even the youth were thrown head first into battle. The cause of this time was a robin, with dark feathers, and beady blue eyes, his only aim, to destroy the Bird clans…
“It’s not that late!” A little sparrow chirped. “It’s getting to the best part!”
“No, you must be on your way to sleep.” The older sparrow tweeted.
“Awwww, please Marpo. Just a little more?” The little sparrow chirped.
“Now Fawn,” Another sparrow, named Niya chirped, springing towards Fawn and Marpo. “It’s time you get some rest; you have a big day tomorrow.” She chirped, leading her young towards the nest.
“No I don’t!” Fawn retorted. “Nothing ever happens to me!” He sulked, snuggling into his mothers wing.
“Well tomorrow you’re going to have the Flight,” She chirped the sentence with much respect. The ancient ritual where the young had to fly to Tree of Birds, all young had to do it once they reached three moons. It determined whether they became a Guardian.
An amazed look dawned upon the young's face.
"Really?" He chirped, his beak opened in awe. He had only stories of the great journey from his older brother, Kai.
"Yeah, but it means you have to go now!" A new voice wafted into the tree hollow and flapping wings came with it. A friendly beak poked its way into the hollow and a strong sparrow followed.
"Father!" Fawn screeched, rushing towards his father.
"Hey buddy!" Torque chattered, opening his wings wide. "I heard you were making the flight, I had to fly home to see you off!" He wrapped his wings around his son, rubbing his beak lightly on his sons head, a sign of respect, greeting or affection.
"Now bed!" Niya chirped kindly, yet sternly and Fawn reluctantly bounced towards the back of the nest, well away from the wind that blew through the hollow entrance.
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Bee August 3rd 2010, 9:20 pm
This sounds cool! I was in a bird RPG before... it died. XD But I had a rough-legged falcon by the name of Elkaira (shyaddup, you SA peeps). Write more! :D
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 3rd 2010, 11:08 pm
I put guardian there, cause I was at school and the internet blocker wouldn't let me on to thesaurus to get something else D< But I think I might keep it that way X3 *writes more*
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Amber August 4th 2010, 1:43 am
Guardian? Reminds me of those owl books now...
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 4th 2010, 2:01 am
Yeah, I dun know, any ideas for another name?
Anyways, it was only a tiny bit, but UPDATIFIED!!!
Anyways, it was only a tiny bit, but UPDATIFIED!!!
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Legion August 4th 2010, 1:07 pm
Not to be the jerk who picks on people but... Clans, Moons, Ca- Birds? Sounds... Familiar.
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Bee August 4th 2010, 1:08 pm
But Rip... you are the jerk who picks on people. It's what makes you, you! :D
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by kiwiattack August 4th 2010, 7:58 pm
Legion wrote:Not to be the jerk who picks on people but... Clans, Moons, Ca- Birds? Sounds... Familiar.
Um... Yeah I gotta say I agree. It's like the Warriors series and The Gaurdians of Ga'hoole series had a baby.
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 5th 2010, 3:29 am
Well, I'm asking you guys for some help. And its not going to be anything like Warrior Cats or Guardians for Ga'Hoole. Those are just temporary names, 'till I can think of anything better.
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by River August 5th 2010, 11:17 am
I thought you were talking about cats until you started writing the prologue. x.x
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Bee August 5th 2010, 3:02 pm
I thought it was too. XD
And wouldn't it be a bird flock? O.o
And wouldn't it be a bird flock? O.o
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Legion August 5th 2010, 3:16 pm
Or if there was some crows it'd be a murder of crows.
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 6th 2010, 12:25 am
But there are gonna be groups of them, clans...
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Bee August 6th 2010, 12:26 am
Uhm, flocks? Murders? What do you mean by that?
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 6th 2010, 12:29 am
Well there will be a group of owls, one of sparrows, one of falcons, and the sort you know...
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Bee August 6th 2010, 12:33 am
They all need their own names :D
Parliament of owls, a host of sparrows, a cast of falcons... and stuff. :3
http://www.lyberty.com/encyc/articles/murder.html
They could be like... tribes. Each tribe has a unique name. ;3
Parliament of owls, a host of sparrows, a cast of falcons... and stuff. :3
http://www.lyberty.com/encyc/articles/murder.html
They could be like... tribes. Each tribe has a unique name. ;3
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by The Lorax August 6th 2010, 12:36 am
Good thinking...! What about for guardians though?
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Re: Blue Robin [WIP]
by Doc Oc August 10th 2010, 7:25 pm
Yeah, they don't have to be clans...flocks. Doesn't sound as epic, but...hm...
Colonies?
Colonies?
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