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Strike
by Swifttalon April 15th 2011, 10:56 pm
Chapter 1
Kale could sense it. The Nothing was near. It was just now emerging, but itwould get powerful fast. Really fast.
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"Should we really be skating here?"
"Yeah! Sure."
"Okay, fine, but if we get in trouble, I'm blaming you."
Aw crap. Gotta go. I'll finish later.
Kale could sense it. The Nothing was near. It was just now emerging, but itwould get powerful fast. Really fast.
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"Should we really be skating here?"
"Yeah! Sure."
"Okay, fine, but if we get in trouble, I'm blaming you."
Aw crap. Gotta go. I'll finish later.
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Re: Strike
by Rivermask13 April 20th 2011, 1:06 pm
keep going! *waiting for the rest* sounds good so far.
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Re: Strike
by Moss April 23rd 2011, 1:57 am
I don't like it, there's already a typo. :ISwifttalon - Audi wrote:itwould get powerful fast. Really fast.
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Re: Strike
by Bee April 23rd 2011, 12:02 pm
Yersh. And Kale... I heard it from another site cause the main admin's name was Kale. :D *was the co-admin*
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Re: Strike
by Swifttalon April 25th 2011, 3:53 pm
NNOOOOOOOO!!!! I have all week to type the story, but I left the original copy at home! 
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Re: Strike
by Swifttalon April 26th 2011, 10:58 pm
I have the first rough drat of the entire book writttin at my house in NC. Im in Georgia. Good job, right?
And about the whole name thing, I started it before I had read the Hunger Games and I don't know anyone named Kale, It just kind of came to me. I based the character herself of one of my friends. The name... I don't know where it came from or why. It just fit.
And about the whole name thing, I started it before I had read the Hunger Games and I don't know anyone named Kale, It just kind of came to me. I based the character herself of one of my friends. The name... I don't know where it came from or why. It just fit.
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