[FINISHED] Rayne -
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[FINISHED] Rayne -
by The Lorax September 26th 2010, 9:32 pm
Name: Rayne
Gender: Male
Age: 19 moons
Affiliate: Loner
Rank: N/A
Looks: Rayne is a pitch black tom. He has markings of dark grey including a small patch on his chest, on his muzzle, and his toes are dark grey too. He has a scar accross his left eye, and another stretching along his thigh on his right hing leg. He has a small but lithe build. He has well toned muscles and unusually long claws and teeth. His eyes are a light shade of purple, but not pale, just lighter then most. [Ace, I bought these from you two weeks ago or something.
Personality: Usually he wouldn't be smiling. Rayne isn't exactly the smily friendly type. He's very independent, and really only relies on himself. Rayne is also known as the Shadow. He's the type that will follow others around. He's an incredible tracker, and can follow another cat for days without being noticed. He is clever, sly and deceitful. He is nimble and lithe, making him a great hunter. But he is also a formidable fighter. He is incredibly quick and a better fighter then most experience warriors. His long claws are deadly in a fight. He does have a soft side but rarely shows it.
History: Born in the city. Rayne wasn't a kittypet, just a stray in the city. As soon as Rayne and his brother were able to walk, their mother began there journey towards the forest.
While traveling through the last few blocks before reaching the forest, Rayne, his mother and brother ran into a group of dogs while traveling at night. The dogs attacked and Rayne recieved his scar on his hind leg and accross his eye. His brother was killed and his mother had a badly injured left foreleg. But she insited they continue to move.
On the last street of houses, Raynes mother watched intently a grey tabby tom playing in the garden of a Two-leg nest. Raynes mother admited to Rayne that the tom was in fact her mate, his father, who had left her when she found out she was pregnant.
As it was mid-sunset, Raynes mother decided they would rest near by. But Rayne couldn't sleep, he snuck back to the nest and found his father sleeping out on the porch. Rayne approached him, and explained that he was his son.
He took it the wrong way and began to fight against his son, not recognising him. But Raynes fathers yowling woke his Two-leg, the two-leg grabbed Rayne and bet him. Raynes mother managed to save him. Raynes father realised the truth as he watched his old mate being blundered to death by the two-leg.
Rayne watched in horror, as the two-leg went back inside, leaving her body on the ground, Raynes father turned to him. "I'm so sorry," He mewed, but Rayne, full on anger shouted at him, "This wouldn't have happened if you hadn't left her!" He yowled, and before Raynes father could say more, Rayne dragged his mother away, his father looking on.
The forest was just beyound the house he had incountered his father at. So it was only a short distance that Rayne dragged his mother. He buried her, as far away from his fathers house as he could manage. With his eyes full of tears, he turned and padded into the forest, beginning his journey into the forest, that will take him to the clans.
Gender: Male
Age: 19 moons
Affiliate: Loner
Rank: N/A
Looks: Rayne is a pitch black tom. He has markings of dark grey including a small patch on his chest, on his muzzle, and his toes are dark grey too. He has a scar accross his left eye, and another stretching along his thigh on his right hing leg. He has a small but lithe build. He has well toned muscles and unusually long claws and teeth. His eyes are a light shade of purple, but not pale, just lighter then most. [Ace, I bought these from you two weeks ago or something.
Personality: Usually he wouldn't be smiling. Rayne isn't exactly the smily friendly type. He's very independent, and really only relies on himself. Rayne is also known as the Shadow. He's the type that will follow others around. He's an incredible tracker, and can follow another cat for days without being noticed. He is clever, sly and deceitful. He is nimble and lithe, making him a great hunter. But he is also a formidable fighter. He is incredibly quick and a better fighter then most experience warriors. His long claws are deadly in a fight. He does have a soft side but rarely shows it.
History: Born in the city. Rayne wasn't a kittypet, just a stray in the city. As soon as Rayne and his brother were able to walk, their mother began there journey towards the forest.
While traveling through the last few blocks before reaching the forest, Rayne, his mother and brother ran into a group of dogs while traveling at night. The dogs attacked and Rayne recieved his scar on his hind leg and accross his eye. His brother was killed and his mother had a badly injured left foreleg. But she insited they continue to move.
On the last street of houses, Raynes mother watched intently a grey tabby tom playing in the garden of a Two-leg nest. Raynes mother admited to Rayne that the tom was in fact her mate, his father, who had left her when she found out she was pregnant.
As it was mid-sunset, Raynes mother decided they would rest near by. But Rayne couldn't sleep, he snuck back to the nest and found his father sleeping out on the porch. Rayne approached him, and explained that he was his son.
He took it the wrong way and began to fight against his son, not recognising him. But Raynes fathers yowling woke his Two-leg, the two-leg grabbed Rayne and bet him. Raynes mother managed to save him. Raynes father realised the truth as he watched his old mate being blundered to death by the two-leg.
Rayne watched in horror, as the two-leg went back inside, leaving her body on the ground, Raynes father turned to him. "I'm so sorry," He mewed, but Rayne, full on anger shouted at him, "This wouldn't have happened if you hadn't left her!" He yowled, and before Raynes father could say more, Rayne dragged his mother away, his father looking on.
The forest was just beyound the house he had incountered his father at. So it was only a short distance that Rayne dragged his mother. He buried her, as far away from his fathers house as he could manage. With his eyes full of tears, he turned and padded into the forest, beginning his journey into the forest, that will take him to the clans.
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Re: [FINISHED] Rayne -
by KYUU October 9th 2010, 4:17 pm
DON'T TRIPPLE POST! D< Jeez. You need to be patient. >>
-shrugs- 'Proved.
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